THESIS!!!
Sample Research Question:
What has proven to be more effective over the course of time: a violent revolution, or a peaceful resolution?
Precise Claim:
Peaceful resolutions are the best way of solving political problems, especially the problems regarding transference of political power(economic and social).
Complete thesis statement:
Regarding the issue concerning the transference of political power, as opposed to means of violence, a peaceful resolution holds better potential for future liberty, justice, and equality.
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This is good in the regard that it really does cover all your bases, and acts as a launching pad for what your paper is going to be about.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I can think of adding possibly is something that I too need to work on. Sometimes it's necessary to add the 'blueprint' portion to a thesis (examples in the book) to help readers know exactly what they're going to be getting into.
Great job though, this is a very interesting topic!
I liked your thesis statement. It lets the readers know what the paper is about.
ReplyDeleteI think that your thesis might be a little too open... Maybe try using a specific time...
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